All Comments on 'One Good Turn Returns Another Ch. 01'

Good beginning!

5

a nice bit of revenge, when is the rest of the story due

Lets your imagination run wild, doesn't it? Good story. The Nam GI's coming home never deserved the treatment they got from a bunch of ignorant hippies. What about Hanoi Jane? why wasn't she prosecuted? Duh! The fact that most of the troops in Nam were draftees should tell you something. I got my pre=draft notice in early 64. Went down and enlisted for the longest school they had. I lucked out and got sent to Germany then France served in 101st Signal Battalion fixed station microwave stuff. Got out in 67 just when they were building up in Nam. The way I look at our politicians killed 50 thousand soldiers for what? End of discussion. Fun story keep up the writing.

I hope there will be a second story of the hot tub incident and Chloe's divorce.

Interesting set-up - let's see what follows.

Enjoying the story but where does “romance” come in? I get the reduced exposure if posted elsewhere, but this isn’t the right genre unless he gets Chloe in the end. (That would be awkward) 3.7*