All Comments on 'One Hell of a Day Ch. 01'

This story wasn't horrible, in fact, some parts were pretty good. The main story line, however was totally unrealistic. It through of the whole story a little, for me atleast. Again though, it wasn't horrible.

Seems like you need another entry to complete the entire school day. Your first try wasn't bad but don't skip using a spell checker and correct your grammar errors. Will be checking for your next entry.

When's part 2 coming out? ;)