All Comments on 'One Last Time'

and the world is a little bit dimmer but heaven is all the brighter. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very touching melancholy story. Your descriptions on everything enhanced the telling of this sad, yet shining tale.

My compliments.

Thank you!

A glowing tale. I can see the seeds planted for Carrie and 'Boy'. I hope you grace us with that like you blessed us with this excellent romance.

This was one sad but, beautiful story. I was so glad that Stella was able to have peace with Peter by her side at the last moments. Yes this is a tear jerker but lovely the same.

and Living it every day of my remaining life... I see her in my brain, I feel her in my body, I feel her love in my heart,,,, I will love her forever and ever and ever

Superb. I went through a similar situation but with my 'kid' sister at 70 plus.

We did not have the sexual relationship of your characters but believe me the emotions were just as you described them especially as we had been apart for years thanks to her marriage.

This was beautiful. I feel as if I can relate to the emotional states of the characters. It truly brought tears to my eyes and warmth to my heart.

This was an amazing story. I was in tears, not for Stella's death, but for the depth of caring and compassion shown. Thank you for this story.

you actually made me cry. For that I hate you, and I hate sickness , I hate death, and I hate the love that you described.

What a shitty, cornball story and a waste of time. Corny, cringe-worthy and utterly predictable. Go back to school and take a few creative writing classes. I ran into this shit story via the random story spinner and what a mistake that proved to be! I wish I could give you negative stars.