All Comments on 'One Little Moan'

Hmmmmm……. Why do you need to use the word Slut? What does that make you? Try and be a little more creative in your writing. Slut is a degrading word.

Would be 5***** if you didn't show your need to have the guy call the girl - any girl - a "slut" every chance he can

And pressure on the hymen isn't likely to trigger an orgasm - don't think it has nerves with the right connections

on a first-time story, and probably true for a lot of young women, if we only knew. I liked the way you juxtaposed her initial resistance/horror against her overwhelming need, and left her still battling with both feelings, even at the end. Nice emotional journey.

~B

borders on non-consent. you ought to move it to that category

Not a fan of him calling every girl a slut and the non-consensual nature of the story. Got some very rapey vibes going here.

Loved it

The ultimate surrender to her needs overcoming external life pressure to abstain is hot

Hot but should be in non-con.

Mmmm

This is fucking disgusting, this is quite literally blatant rape, not to mention the blackmail and manipulation. Put this story in non-con or fuck off, you could have at least added it to the story tags. A very large number of people are victims of rape and don't need your disgusting fetishes reminding them of their trauma.

Rape - non-consensual penetration is rape, whether with a penis or fingers or some inanimate object

Rape - she said "No" and he went on - prior consent doesn't count - I guessed the age and sex of the author correctly - only a teenage boy finds the possibiity of an undesired pregnancy erotic