by Fillmore
Well written love story that tugs the heart. thaksk for writing it!
I'm startled by your touch with words and conveyed emotions.
I'm also jealous of your strongly exhibited abilities.
Keep it on the high road so most of us can enjoy you as a respected and entertaining Story Teller.
Thanks Author - With High Regard
A very emotional story. My wife passed away six years ago of cancer. I remember taking care of her at home, cooking and cleaning the house, and all. It was hard for me to let her go and have relief from her pain.
very good writing with a very good story.
not much of that around here.
I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and it's use of imagery was excellent. I thought it was interesting that it wasn't so much a normal sex story so much as a poinient story about loss and moving on from that loss.
Hope you write more. You seem pretty talented.