All Comments on 'One More Pizza Delivery'

LOVED wife's hot wardrobe teasing, excellent narration.

as an old Hitchcock fan, just wondering, any way we could weave some tension or suspense into this great series?

the trepidation about appearing on a porn site did create some nervous energy

the unexpected 2nd man was a twist. unexpected twists are very cool

the frustration of husband trying to get a better view was kinetic, helped charge things up a little.

maybe if that camera set up was a live feed?

so far every episode has hot wife doing her hot thing almost perfectly from hubby's script like a marionette. and then husband "gets his" like clockwork as punctuation.

wouldn't it be fun to shake up the formula?

by shake up I mean...they set out to do A, B, maybe C.

but then the train caroms wildly off script

maybe even husband must accept a delayed gratification (next day? after the weekend?)

as your dedicated reader I'd love to find myself being convinced "it's gone too far!" amidst the heated plot development.

Have fun!

Thanks for writing and posting!

I wish my husband would arrange for this to happen to me.The thought of being filmed and used by ugly strangers is so erotic.I would willingly let them do anything to me. Caroline Price,London x

5 stars.

Liked your first pizza story, but this second one was better. Lit should have had a link to your previous story at least under related stories. 5 Stars for both stories.

I love your shy wife stories. I was also a shy wife at one time. Hubby kept prodding at first, but after awhile I became very aroused. me to expose a little more of myself to strangers. I have to admit it was embarrassing. but after awhile I became very aroused.

Looks like I will have t get a lawn boy and order a pizza.

Another great story, Rigid! Keep them coming :-)

Fumbling with a guy named tubby, not a zenith of the category. Sorry.

My husband and I love to tease while out and about on vacation. It’s fun to become a different person and let out inhibitions down. We’ve even done the pizza delivery to the hotel thing. I didn’t suck off the guy, actually he was more of a kid. Maybe 18 at the most. But he loved the little tank top and panties I had on. I attacked my husband afterwards. It’s such a shame to come here to enjoy these stories and see the comment section full of such hatred. I hope Literotica shuts down the comments if these sick minded people don’t stop.

While some guys love sharing their wives, I’m not sure a fat smelly delivery guy would be my first choice. But as the wife said, she felt sorry for him and knew he would never have a chance with someone as hot as her. I suppose some people would get off on that aspect.

I liked the story a lot. Was getting very turned on by the scenario, but then, the cock went from ass to mouth and ... no. That's a huge turn off. Fortunately, I kept reading.

Maybe in the 1st paet, but not in this.

I wonder with her liberal use of the prostitute's finger if she had a profession before meeting her husband.

Not really my cup of tea, it all just felt grimy, like that old carpet that your shoes stick to as you walk across it.

My wife answered the door naked for a pizza delivery, but instead of giving her ass to him, she sucked his cock and let him fuck her pussy bareback. He shot a load in her and came back later that night to fuck her again.

The wife definitely needs to get her nipples pierced rings with a sparkly stone

My wife hase been caught on tape sucking strangers off in bars during Fantasy Fest. I'm always checking around to see if any have them have gotten posted

My wife did that a few times when we was at the beach for the weekend. She would always let them see her naked and if she like them she would fuck him. I still look at the videos we took. One time she was so hot that she said she was going to fuck anyone that came to the door that night. We had been drinking all day so we were both drunk she order and when it came all she had on was her bathrobe. I went out by the pool so she could do whatever she wanted about an hour she called me said they were gone. I got to the room and all she said was watch the video I did and it was a female person with her she said that she didn't said anything other then come on in and help yourself from what I seen they were both hot and wanted to fuck. Hot stuff

Hot story! What a sexy hot wife he has. Love reading these stories!

Hot story! What a sexy hot wife he has. Love reading these stories!

Brilliant! Beth x