All Comments on 'One More Year Ch. 05'

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curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

Ahhh I'm already fienin' for the next update! I'm Sue before a test loool, I love how Eric encourages Jay to study because some of these dudes will waste your time and are really praying on your downfall chile.

I'm green with envy cuz Jay is the kid who'd barely study and still get exceptional marks, God really has favourites.

I'd be irritated by Ellie's nosiness if she wasn't such a good friend to Jay.

Looking forward to the next one!

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks! It's on it's way! Hopefully soon, depending on my work ethic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

love how detailed and distinct the characters are, even minor ones like Sue, Louis, the teacher etc., ... dialogue is on point, Ellie is definitely like someone I know haha

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anon! That's a huge compliment, and it means a lot to me to hear it. 😊

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I'm just a gay dude from Cape Town, South Africa, flexing my writing muscles and putting out some stories about cute guys falling in love, hoping to make some money off of them one day so I can write instead of work. That's the dream. Thanks for reading One More Year! (Assumi...

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