All Comments on 'One More Year Ch. 06'

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herdirtymindherdirtymindalmost 3 years ago

I very much like where this is going.

I'm living somewhere right now, that has a garage door that sounds like a seismic event, so your description made me chuckle.

SweetoverflowSweetoverflowalmost 3 years ago

Loving the story so far! The way it's progressing. The initial chapter were really slow. But now it seemed content. Can't wait for more!

whydomenwhydomenalmost 3 years ago

Awesome to finally get to read the next chapter! It was a pleasure to read and very sweet, looking forward to the next one

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks herdirtymind! Before Eric, the only time the earth ever moved for Jay was when someone was parking. :D

(Also, if anyone else sees this comment, if you haven't checked out herdirtymind's stories - you really should. They're amazing. I recommend reading Unrequited before Requited. Better payoff that way, imho.)

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Sweetoverflow! Yeah, this was written as a novel, so the setup was pretty important, and (hopefully) I tie a whole bunch of things together later. But glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reading!

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks whydomen! Yeah... sorry about the delay. I had my reasons, I promise. (And go on about them - at some length - on my blog.)

Jamesraphael22Jamesraphael22almost 3 years ago

Can’t wait for the next!

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks James! I hope you can though XD

armplasmaarmplasmaalmost 3 years ago

This whole series is so wholesome. I legit enjoy so much the non-erotic part and the non-Eric part. It's just a really really good story that makes me happy. Usually when it's this easy, I would get bored, but in this case I'm not at all.

AkshunLoveAkshunLovealmost 3 years ago
This is such an endearing story

I’m really enjoying this and it’s clear that you’re a major smartypants because I’m a minor smartypants and I don’t understand any of what you said about maths, so bravo 😂 I love the character development and Jay is such a humble, relatable guy that you just really want him to have his happily every after. This is a slow burn story, which I love, so I’m looking forward to when it really heats up. Well done!

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks armplasma! I'm glad you're enjoying the non-erotic/non-Eric stuff - especially given the ratios there. 'Not boring' is definitely one of the things I'm going for. 😄

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks AkshunLove! Hopefully I can continue to entertain. 😊

Ginger630Ginger630almost 3 years ago

I’m loving this story so far!!!! Can’t wait to read more.

BradleyScottBradleyScottalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks Ginger!

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

A beautifully gentle first time. So happy for Jay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It makes me so happy when reading this story!

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