All Comments on 'One More Year Ch. 11'

I'm Jay, I am. Awkward. Write 20 chapters. Great dialogue. So much harder to choose a favorite line but I'm going with "holding up the smelly bundle." Still rooting for Louis. Anything seems short term.

Another great chapter.

I particularly like the way that despite Jay's emotional problems his logical brain kicks in to bag the soiled clothes outside the house and to put extra bedding on the sofa bed. Great writing!