All Comments on 'One Night Can Change Your Whole World Ch. 01'

This is unbelievably good. I am so looking forward to more, this might be my new favorite of yours, just edging out The Librarian.

Words can't describe what I am feeling now. Where is pt 2? So so so HOT

Great read. But left a mother fucker hanging Part 2!?

Well written, but please don’t tease us...we need the rest of the story.

Let us see part 2 soon! That was hot!

Great first chapter. Looking forward to the next

Love it. Please continue 1

Well written story, great build up and fantastic climax. Really looking forward to the reveal!

Sorry, but I have to disagree with the other posts. Your writing style is sort of juvenile, and you obviously have never actually had sex with a woman. How can you fuck in the missionary position, wield a crop to slap her tits, all the while riding an egg strapped to her clit?????? Your premise is pretty good, but the impossibilites ruined it for me. Try actually fucking a woman before writing any more.

Awesome story. The build up is such a turn on. The sisters part is greatly a turn on too. Waiting on the next chapter!!

I like the story and the characters. I hope they get more in love than the BDSM aspect. If that's what you want, ok. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Raping his sister by posing as her boy friend was off-putting. Presenting it as her secret fantasy didn’t help much.

Well done. I look forward to reading your collection.

Hoop to see the rest of the story soon. I enjoyed this first episode

Amazing story so far! PLEASE continue it! Gotta know where they go from here!

Yes, please continue story!

I read through chapter 4 and loved it. Couldn’t put it down.

Hot ! This story made me wanna fuck my sister , problem is I don’t have one . Somebody lend me one please ???

I hope you choose to continue this story. It's a good premise that the sister actually wants her brother. I'm not sure if the sister will figure it out before Adam reveals himself, but he doesn't stop when she calls for her brother, nor when she calls for Adam.

Wow! This is certainly a great start to this story. Thank you!

Honestly, I was hoping for him to call her on the lie about who she claimed Adam was. If he could get get her to admit she's into her brother before revealing himself, that would be and awesome segue.

Great story

Scores 5/5

Some of the prose early on was a bit disjointed, but everything was solid as the story progressed. I'm looking forward to reading part 2. (Not sure how I missed this series previously...)

Great story. She is one kinky woman. Lucky guy😂

I was mostly disappointed that Adam didn't reveal his identity to Ashley. After what she said in the throws of passion, there was PLENTY of material for Adam to work into a reveal. I'm definitely not into pain and bondage. I personally equate these things with physical abuse even if it's desired and welcomed by the victim. I was physically abused by my own father. It's a HUGE turn off for me. I can tolerate reading it here because it's not done heavily or to an extreme. But you still lose points for it nonetheless. 3/5

I wished for a conrontation the quality of the story and you as a writer is in this revel how realistic it is defines the story. I can't give you 5 stars until it is finished