All Comments on 'One Night in London'

Short and sweet, awesome !!!

Hoping for a threesome.

CONGRATS

But when the sex happens, it just zooms by. Lacks details. Lacks real eroticism.

She climbs on top of him to fuck him. No breast involvement described. No description of anything much about the act except that they came together. No speeding up and/or slowing down. No dialog about what either wanted more or less of, or what was better. No getting close to cumming and then backing off.

Gave it three stars.

Clever

Raw, immediate, well-told. The proximate future has untold possibilities....

Interesting. 3 stars for this story

A threesome with tom and daughter should take place