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by ZachDocEight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
the "power"?

would have been a lot better if you didn't keep referencing "i used my power", like wtf man? stopped reading after the 2nd half of the 2nd page as it just sounded so stupid

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Some minor inconsistencies

Her eye colour changed from green to blue through the story.j

Archer45Archer45almost 3 years ago

Don't like the story go somewhere else

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Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...