All Comments on 'One Night in Taipei'

I liked it... I really liked it!

Lot of realistic detail and play, Nice, loved it.

I really enjoy these little bite-size stories that are short enough to read several at a time. There was just enough setup to flesh out the characters, give them depth, and make the situation plausible without getting bogged down in detail. I also liked that there was a lot of dialogue between the characters.

But went too far too fast.

For example, why did she have to take her own top and bra off? What was the rush? Couldn't she have enjoyed his attention to her breasts, and then ask if he'd like to see them? Feel them naked? Taste them? etc.

And the dialog was somewhat stilted.

Good premise.

But aex is too rushed.

Four stars,