by joshprim
Great store and I am ready for it to continue .they must all have fun together and with Matt again I hope .
At least I got to ogle a hot guy in the Quarter one afternoon - but he was too absorbed in his laptop LOL. Well done!
Hot as Hell!!!
Great story and really believable. Hope you post more about Mark's adventures with these 4 guys. Really hot and hard inducing. cp
Hot story! Lucky Mark :)
It is about time you wrote another....all of yours are great
This got me so hard, imagining taking a young guy's virginity. Great story; please write more about their adventures together.
I had intended to write a sequel to this story about want happened the next morning when Mark awoke, but in view of the lack of comments, it looks like I won't be doing that.
While I enjoy writing my stories, a large part of the reason I (and many other authors) write them is to obtain appreciation from the readers (it's sort of like applause). There's a lot of work that goes into writing a good story and one hopes to be able to read some appreciation for it in the comments. Without that why bother???
I think this is one of my best stories, but unfortunately it seems to have failed to appeal enough to many of those who have read it for them to take the time to say what they thought about it.
Josh Prim
All of your feedback is VERY positive. Sometimes it's more about quality than quantity. You're in the hot list with a rating of 4.64 stars out of 5 as I write this and with the heartfelt approval of all who've commented. That's what I call a success when I post. You are clearly appreciated by your readers.
Please write a short sequel, because this story was very erotic. What a lucky young man indeed, to be fucked like that by 2 of the roomates. His life as a gay bottom is assured, and I'd bet he'll be enjoying hot gay sex with all the roomates eventually. Maybe he can move in with them too. Wonderful!
i still go back and read this story i love it! i hope you do a sequel sometime please <3 x
Great story- I like the pacing and the way Mark fit seamlessly with the four roommates! Part 2 should be even more eventful! Mark is a lucky man!
really great story !, very well written and everything happens at a fast pace, well done !
I love it. The only thing I might have done would be the have Pat ask Mark several times if he liked the big dick in his ass. Mark of course would say yes. I really liked Mark thinking Pat was stronger. In so much as to say he was subordinate to him. Then when Jeff fucked him he knew he was a true bottom boy bitch.
New Orleans is my home town and you really did it justice! I could smell the streetcar ride and I’ve had that burger. A very nice deflowering too!