All Comments on 'One Night in Toronto'

This is my first time reading from your story list and I wanted to thank you for your entry in the special event. This one has appeal to those looking for a common theme and 'a happy ending'.

I don't let a few typos distract me from a good story, but this had more than a few. There are issues with sentence structure, grammar, and punctuation too. It seemed like the whole writing process was rushed, which is a shame because the story was really quite engaging. I enjoyed it despite the flaws. Bonus stars for referencing Princess Bride and Harsh Mistress. Do yourself a favor though and find a good second set of eyes to look over your story before you click "submit". It will go a long way to improving your quality.

You are correct: I was rushed and I only had a chance to give it a quick read myself. I will do better for Geek Pride (I have targeted next Friday as my writing deadline). Thanks again for the feedback. Much appreciated.