All Comments on 'One Night Only Ch. 02'

Very nice!

Love 'son impregnates mom' stories. This one is very well done, in my opinion.

I still think dad is fucking mark

now you need another chapter

Pretty much a repeat of chapter 1.

Next chapter

This deserves another chapter. 5 stars

Very sexy...love that it's getting nastier and more dangerous...

Please another chapter this is one of the best I've ever read

Gilbert was often teased in school with the kids calling him "Gilbert Grape."

Gilbert and his mom need to go to a motel or something where they can be alone. They wouldn't need to worry about getting caught. Gilbert's mom can get loud and vocal a lot more than at home with no worries.

of your stories I've read I like this one the most. it needs another chapter

Beautiful in so many ways. The need for each other is enormous as Gilbert's erection.

I got to the point where Gilbert says " He doesn't deserve you. " and I had to quit. It's ironic that those words are so true, nobody deserves what she did to her husband. I can understand the pain an injury that leads to a broken dream. It leaves you bitter and hateful. But banging somebody else to relieve stress was idiotic, condomless no less.

It's been awhile since I've read the first chapter I was excited to see chapter three. Now though? I just found out that the "victim" was all her own doing. From what I've gathered they should have split up years ago. But she used her husband to instead bankroll her own bastardo. ( < this should go before the other paragraph. )

Why did you have to make me hate this women for being such a cunt? Why couldn't you just make this the husbands fault 100%? It ruined the fantasy of the dad being a dick even after stepping up and taking care of her bastardo.

I, for one, like stories with all the intrigue and convolutions that this one has. Gilbert's a love child. Dad has latent homosexual yearnings for the oner he knows is his. That' what sets this story apart from 'the dad's gone through divorce or death' stories; they're very simple in construct and tend to bore me with their sameness.

But what really sets this apart is just how incredibly well the sex is described; man, does this woman feel, i mean really feel, every inch of her son's love, every nuance of his desire. Did i mention the inches?-deeper than any man before him, her son. Fuck! that is just so smokin' hot!

It's not just the sex, but the torture she's been putting herself through all these years that is so eloquently, evocatively put forth. The pulchritude of this one shines through like heaven on a cloudless day! Thanks for writing!