All Comments on 'One Night Only Ch. 03 - Final'

Nice and hot

Need mature story version of this

Dunno about the hard plot points and actions of the characters. The author decided to go all in and used his considerable skills to make the conclusion credible Platinum character exposition for sure.

Ergo the obvious score

Full Marks*****.

The skip in time from the first ultrasound to a yr later kinda sucked

great

Very nice story. I sometimes wished that Steve would get a reality check in an embarrassing way to detune his high strung ass . Overall a very good and to the point story! I'm not sure what the correct term is, but the "Straight to the point" writing is something new to me in a authors writing. I enjoyed that and I hope that you have it in your other stories. 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💪🇺🇸