by JCBeleren
Great, what a good read much different than anything else I have read anywhere 5* Onwards and upwards to see how Jason managed to survive, I can't see him getting shot.
Excellent start. Even though you telegraphed who she was, you still managed to keep it exciting and hot. This hopefully has a part two since I never did check before becoming entranced with this story. Here’s to hoping for more.
Excellent! I hope this continues as a series. A lot of potential. Something like, The Fugitive.
No 5's in my world, but for this one, I'll make an exception. Fantastic work, can't wait till the next chapter!
I have just discovered you and am totally impressed with your writing. I loved this one and will find you on Patreon!
A "This was great!", as requested =)
But seriously, it really was great.
I like that you don't say that her submission is 100% the gift's fault, there's room for ambiguity there.
Good work all in all, keep it coming
Been a solid ride of sex and emotion so far, though the dialogue comes off corny or cringy in some of the sex.
I'd much prefer this expanded than some of your others. No offense, but I much prefer this to the stories with literal bimbos.
I just love how this story develops. Very curious to see where this goes next. Thanks!
Very interesting. I'd definitely be interested in seeing a sequel. I particularly enjoyed how you showed him struggling to resist using his power, rather than just using it as he pleased. I was a tad surprised with how submissive she was right off the bat, but not so surprised as to be taken out of the story. Well done.
This was a very interesting start. Please continue the story. Panther fan.
You are a very talented writer to pull off such a good story, with the necessary background, in only 2 pages. I was sitting forward in my chair waiting for the next move and was not disappointed in any way. Please let the games continue. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Thought this was gonna be a redemption story for him but this twist works good too.
I have read several of your recent stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed them. I look forward to more in the series.
I like it, a "restrained" MC story, and one with consequences. Please continue.
I've been reading all your stories as they come out, and they are of the highest quality. I can't wait to see what the next update brings. More top-tier quality obviously! Keep doing what you're doing. Thanks for your creativity and hard work.
I started reading your stories recently. You are already in my top 3 favorite authors. Keep it up!:)
Another excellent story. Keep up the great work.
Looking forward to the development of the characters and the story
Please continue with this story line. It is so nice to see some real thought out into a mind control story.
The perfect erotic story, filled with sex, conflict and a sense of danger to grab onto and hold the hearts and minds of your readers. Please do not leave any of us hanging as we have emotionally invested ourselves into Jason and Maria.
I also wonder about how gorgeous her friends are, are they goddesses like Maria San Luca?
Honestly, you are my favorite author on the entire site. I absolutely adore your writing and love this plotline. I eagerly await your next installment, if there is one!
Yes, dear author, please continue! If by using his ability he can outmanoeuvre mob bosses and become one himself, or simply take their women, that'd be thrilling stuff! Granted it leaves him open to losing people as well, and that can be saddening/break the flow.
But absolutely do continue.