All Comments on 'One Night 01 - Ten to Midnight'

I enjoyed this story. Please continue

Yes, dear author, please continue! If by using his ability he can outmanoeuvre mob bosses and become one himself, or simply take their women, that'd be thrilling stuff! Granted it leaves him open to losing people as well, and that can be saddening/break the flow.

But absolutely do continue.

Honestly, you are my favorite author on the entire site. I absolutely adore your writing and love this plotline. I eagerly await your next installment, if there is one!

This was better than great. Keep it up.

I am always looking forwards of new releases from you!

The perfect erotic story, filled with sex, conflict and a sense of danger to grab onto and hold the hearts and minds of your readers. Please do not leave any of us hanging as we have emotionally invested ourselves into Jason and Maria.

I also wonder about how gorgeous her friends are, are they goddesses like Maria San Luca?

Please continue with this story line. It is so nice to see some real thought out into a mind control story.

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Looking forward to the development of the characters and the story

Another excellent story. Keep up the great work.

What a great read!! I hope the story continues.

More, please, soon !

I started reading your stories recently. You are already in my top 3 favorite authors. Keep it up!:)

want more

More more more in the midnight hours we cried more more more lol

I've been reading all your stories as they come out, and they are of the highest quality. I can't wait to see what the next update brings. More top-tier quality obviously! Keep doing what you're doing. Thanks for your creativity and hard work.

I like it, a "restrained" MC story, and one with consequences. Please continue.

I have read several of your recent stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed them. I look forward to more in the series.

I enjoyed , please too next chapter

Thought this was gonna be a redemption story for him but this twist works good too.

I enjoyed this read

You are a very talented writer to pull off such a good story, with the necessary background, in only 2 pages. I was sitting forward in my chair waiting for the next move and was not disappointed in any way. Please let the games continue. Thanks for writing and sharing.

This was a very interesting start. Please continue the story. Panther fan.

I like it, please keep it going.

Very good indeed. Can't wait for the next one :-)

need a sequel please, master

Very interesting. I'd definitely be interested in seeing a sequel. I particularly enjoyed how you showed him struggling to resist using his power, rather than just using it as he pleased. I was a tad surprised with how submissive she was right off the bat, but not so surprised as to be taken out of the story. Well done.

This is fantastic and definitely deserves a sequel!

This is a great start and needs more. I hope to see more.

I just love how this story develops. Very curious to see where this goes next. Thanks!

Been a solid ride of sex and emotion so far, though the dialogue comes off corny or cringy in some of the sex.

I'd much prefer this expanded than some of your others. No offense, but I much prefer this to the stories with literal bimbos.

I like that you don't say that her submission is 100% the gift's fault, there's room for ambiguity there.

Good work all in all, keep it coming

Love the twists and turns. Keep going

A "This was great!", as requested =)

But seriously, it really was great.

Please keep it going

Keep sharing, please.

Master of Mind control - JC you rock!

I have just discovered you and am totally impressed with your writing. I loved this one and will find you on Patreon!

this is great. more smashing.

Can’t wait to read the next chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

No 5's in my world, but for this one, I'll make an exception. Fantastic work, can't wait till the next chapter!

Great start has a lot of places it can go? Keep it up.

Excellent! I hope this continues as a series. A lot of potential. Something like, The Fugitive.

Excellent start. Even though you telegraphed who she was, you still managed to keep it exciting and hot. This hopefully has a part two since I never did check before becoming entranced with this story. Here’s to hoping for more.

Great, what a good read much different than anything else I have read anywhere 5* Onwards and upwards to see how Jason managed to survive, I can't see him getting shot.