All Comments on 'One of Two Ch. 01'

Nothing like being impaled on the horns of a Dilemma, but what a nice one, but what a challenge is facing him.

Well written.

Look forward to the following episodes.

From one who once made that same, what could have been fatal, slip of the tongue, thanks. In my case, I called my future wife by my previous girlfriends name..... (<- that is a pregnant pause) Looking forward to the rest of the story.

I really liked this story. It was sweet, innocent. I didn't really like the first paragraph where you announced how old the characters were - it just sort of lost the mood but the rest was great.

I like how you made it so both girls are likable. Also like how everyone seems to innocent.

The characters in this story seem real, and they are doing believable things. So many stories, just have two people jumping in bed with one another -- without much of a plot. At least there's a dilemma here that has to be solved one way or another. The sexual aspect is icing on the cake, so to speak.