All Comments on 'One of Two Ch. 03'

This was truly one of the best stories I've read on Literotica but I just have to know...do they stay together after graduation? I'd like to think they do but I'd like to know for sure.

It was a really great story. I look forward to reading more of your stories if you decide to enter more stories.

You are far and away one of *the* most talented writers I've ever seen.

Good job! The situation gave us great sexual tension, and our character was still able to keep his girlfriend.

Another great story! I like the way you did this one, kids growing and learning how to handle themselves. Everyone grew in the end, even Nancy got her act together. Keep up the excellent work!

I usually stray away from the "Ch. 01, 02, 03" stuff, however, you have written with craft. Well done, among so many others so boring. The backstory is so important to building structure, I hope to read more about your characters.

They have life.

I really liked this story. I wasn't very fond of the whole Frank and Nancy having sex in the back seat but the relationship between Carly and Sam was amazing.

this has to be by far the best erotic story i have read. it was like reliving my first time - minus the cheating issues. loved reading it. you are a fantastic writer!

Unlike so many erotic stories, very well and carefully plotted with excellent consideration of the emotions involved. Purely perfect release (excuser the expression)of information and involvement. Bravo.

a very enjoyable read that moved along at a steady pace - well done.

I loved it I almost thought it was real! One of the best stories on here! I'd give it 100 stars if I could!!! Great job!

very good series... any possibility of a fourth story?

Great story Strickland. I enjoyed it very much. But I'm really concerned about a dump that field by the oak tree must be. Those kids, maybe the whole damn sr class ought to go out there and get it cleaned up.

I've read several of your stories. This is one of the best. I enjoyed it very much. Yes I would like to read if they stayed together, got married, had a family.. Since you wrote this story in 2005, you could update it with an other chapter.

I wasn't sure how I felt about this story when Nancy first entered the picture but after reading the whole story, I REALLY liked it......

You did a great job delivering the story too.....

I was wondering how you'd end it...would Nancy jump over the car seat naked and blow his cover?

You handled it very well...sexy, sensitive, left me wanting for more!

Very well written and sensitive. You are one of the best writers on this site.

Hi,

What a sexual story…sex sex sex….good ending, but how many guys would do as he did an resist a pussy…like Nancy ..in the heat of the moment!

Turned into a “Hollywood Ending !”

Thanks for that …will read on….

Beejay3