All Comments on 'One Pizza Delivery'

edit your material and see how long she sticks around.

Interesting how you think your stories are so magnificent people just automatically know what you're talking about or the order in which they seem to be happening. That's the kind of opening story that works in a chapter of one on-going story, which is indicated by something such as a chapter number, not a story with at title that indicates it's a standalone story unrelated to any other story.

That was a funny comment about having your wife edit. I gave this story a four. Wifey is doing well being trained.

A good story. Too bad he was so fat. She seemed to enjoy it the way he was, though.

of the stories that used to be posted here ten years ago. It is well written, humorous, total fantasy and titillating. Not deep literature, but a good example of the old type stories where wives were adventurous and husbands enjoyed it.

Has somebody hacked your account? Can't be serious.

It's great when couples can have fun like this. There's nothing better than having a sexy wife who will take another cock for you. Please continue with these stories.

Just the thought that she was worried about getting knocked up shows how much she entertained the thought of taking that dick.

Are willing cuckolds, the lowest form of a human being. They got the morals of an alley cat. Yes, this is fiction, but for anybody even to think and write this shows what kind of person he really is. One Star for this non-erotic drivel. Willing cuckoldry is a fetish and belongs there with the other slime balls.

One of the usual sick stories, from one of the worst authors to post his crap in LW in years.

Why set up a camera when the phone was used??

That was terrible in every aspect. Except it was great at being stupid.

Just WOW. What an unbelievably stupid story. Who comes up with these scenarios ?? The writing is very stilted. Doesn’t flow, and makes no sense. 2 for effort.