All Comments on 'One Sister, One Brother, Two Lovers'

Fuck! Hot! Sure got mine up and interested...!!

This story seems very similar to one that I recall from a while back......

MORE MORE MORE

When I read this I thought I read this before. Then I came to slip-slop-slap and then I knew I had read it before. So I searched for those terms and found. Barley-Jaz. In the comments for him/her he had copied the story with change in the ages. A great story I wonder if we will find the true author. Perhaps they will produce more

Well done.

"This story seems very similar to one that I recall from a while back......"

The story itself is probably a decade old.

I originally wrote it for asstr - this version has been edited, and the participant's ages 'literotica-fied' :-)

Frankly, I am much happier with the age-up .. It felt a bit sleazy with the original.

I also removed some typos and literals.

"A great story I wonder if we will find the true author. Perhaps they will produce more"

Definitely me :-)

And I'm currently plotting a new story - another sibling story - but this time it will be a slower burn, and with more romance.

I hope to have it ready for the Valentines Day contest - but as I say, I'm still working out the plot, so .... no guarantees :-)

that sounds great, bro sis, slow burn and romance :) Just hope there won't be any cheating, sharing, swapping and swinging nonsense..

thx for this great story <3

5/5

I gave a rare 5 stars to this awesome story. Very well detailed and descriptive love between brother & sister.