All Comments on 'One Step Too Far Ch. 01'

Not enough of a story to even rate. Hopefully you will make longer chapters in the future.

an interesting start, look forward to reading more regarding how things develop!

I agree with SissyJolie4u . Interesting start . Could almost hear the musical den den den signifying a tense moment . Laura sounds interesting and attractive . I hope that Chapter two is posted soon . Thanks for your effort hear . ACH

Strong start. I don't feel you wrote to little. Will be adding this to my favorites. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Don't mind that other anon, people are always impatient on this site. I like where this is going!

I'm tempted to write the next few pages if you'd let me.

Very good start. You would have possible kidnapping but went on his own free will to the ranch. You have me hooked on what might happen. Chapter two please.