by RonCabo
Meticulously constructed with hardly any mistakes. Would have liked a little more descriptions of your characters, though. Still, I really like the original setting, and I’m excited to see what happens with the rest of the crew! Impending threesome?
I like this story. Everyone ought to get involved. Also the cabin walls on a boat, catamaran, etc are paper thin, no sound proofing. Every thrust or covered moan can be heard. I hope it’s his sister who’s been lurking and entering his room.
i think I have a pretty good guess which youtube sailing channel you're referencing in the story but you left it vague enough that I could still be wrong. Too many of those channels to keep up with all of them. Refreshing that the boat and sailing details sound right for once without getting in the way of the story.