All Comments on 'One Time Is an Accident'

by Tonyjoe

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Silenus636Silenus636about 11 years ago
Pause, Why?

For fresh perspective: A+! Great so far. Maybe break it into chapters? More, definitely more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bullshit

A real shit story. You asshole writer need to come with something better than "what happens in Vegas..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting story

Well written. The sex scene with the neighbor was great.

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