All Comments on 'One to Die For Ch. 02'

Absolutely great ending -

I agree though he should have stretched it out a bit lol - delayed the wedding a few months to deal with his kids who wanted a pre-nup for instance - done the pre-nup even. Hell he could have made it pretty iron clad and probably still kept them for a few years until they got tired of not doing what they wanted to -

As it sounded so romantic but wasn't sure how it would work with two women.

Then you threw in one hell of a curved ball when it turned out they were gold diggers......why did you go down that road. Totally ruined it.....you must have a mean, sadistic streak in you to kill it off like that and besides if they were a pair of bunny boilers then the police should have been involved.

Thanks for fucking up what was a good, romantic story....I read them as pure escapism and to be entertained....I don't want to read shite like this.....

Alas. Well the story was a bit of a downer but he'll bounce back. Well crafted story for sire. *****

And many, many funny things happen in hospitals. Fun, fun, fun!

Why would anyone be shocked. Especially after the Janet association I began to expect something was off. Only thing that made sense was his property.

Well that escalated quickly. Sure didn't see it coming either. I had to laugh when Dan was cleaning up his house and said "changed the bed which didn't need it since it hadn't even been a month yet". Cracked me up. Too bad that he wasn't able to do something to the girls besides run them off. I'm sure he was smart enough to come up with something. Anyway, good story and well written. Thanks

Well thought out with a good twist at the end, glad you didn’t let him go on getting his end away it made this story work so much better.