All Comments on 'One White Rose Ch. 02'

sexy a double blind taste test . This made the Damsel so very wet

I am hopeful that we get more of Roxanne, you have worked some magic here and I have viewed female co-workers that probably could have used something like this to spark their lives up to a higher flame all the time. Bravo!!

The third and final chapter will be about what happens that Sunday and Monday. Roxanne finally gets some alone time with her lover on Sunday. (sorry, 'alone time' with a paramour in your office after hours isn't quite the same thing).

Teaser: cooking blindfolded as your lover directs you with touches to the bottom of your wrist and whispered descriptions of what's before you.

Personally, I don't practice BDSM, but several very kind readers have helped me by sharing their knowledge and I hope it helped this tale ring true.

On Monday, things fall apart in that she figures out who her Mystery Lover is. I won't tell you what Roxanne decides to do though.

Another great story. Definitely different from most we see here. The connection building between these two is very compelling. I need to know where this goes once they the mystery is revealed.

I did wonder about the orgy and how you could hide the identities of those involved but I will just take that on faith since I found the scene and its affect on Roxanne intense.

Looking forward to the finale.

nice work! but please when are you going to finish it? you always leave one hanging..

So many possibilities.

The above says it all very nicely.

There was so much promise where this could have gone after the first chapter; love, romance, submission... I wish you had posted the third chapter to this story to see where the two decided to go together. As always, thank you for writing and sharing your amazing stories with us!

You could’ve should’ve added another chapter, but in a way it ended well, leaving us to imagine their first night together and their future together.

5/5