All Comments on 'Online Blowjob Class'

Hi HS98

I liked the format of the story, but the start could of been a build up with her teasing and getting the brother interested. The boss gave 30 minutes, could of been 3 days to get the lecture prepared. Maybe more family get involved, or the students get a pass or competition to 'have a go' otherwise great story. 3 stars

That was hot and unique. Well done.

This was an unusual plot, but still very hot. Thanks for sharing.

Very Original

The fact you made it so abrupt and urgent that she satisfy her contract added to her presumed dedication to commitments being a professor made for great instant engagement in the story. The subtle explanations and tidbits of in depth info perfectly timed to continue the whirlpool like escalation of the story demostrate a skill few writers here possess. There is room for a continuation where she could do any number of things to her brother with her other orifaces. Bravo.

@Burrybeaver70

Thanks for the fair critique. True, it could have had much more of a build up, but, I'll admit, when writing this, I was trying to make the plot as streamlined, and the story as quick, as possible. This was because a few of my stories have gotten rather unnecessarily longer than they could've been, so I was trying to avoid making that mistake with this story. I could've went a bit too far with it, it's possible that it would've been better were it longer, but I'm still quite satisfied with the result. Also, I quite like the trope of characters being suddenly thrust into unforeseen, stressful, high-stakes situations, as it makes it much more believable that, in the heat of the moment, they'd do things they would've normally not done, as I'm sure that most people who were in such situations in the real life can attest

@DanDraper

Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad that you liked this story.

@Anonymous

And thank you for the praise, I'm happy that I could provide you with something maybe a little bit different than the norm on this site, and that you still liked it.

@Sabataki

Well, won't lie, I checked whether something similar to this story had already been posted. To my surprise, I hadn't found much of that, and I can't say that that didn't motivate me even further when I was writing this. And of course, thank you for your comment, and I'm glad that you liked this little unusual story of mine :).

@sargedog1

Thanks for the very, very kind words, I always love it when other people who had also published stories on this site react positive to my creations, and I'm truly glad that you reading enjoyed my story so much.