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by CacheGuy

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hammer17hammer17over 17 years ago
WOW!!!

Well now, I must say, WOW.. Great story, I do hope you will continue with it..

Paul

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
bad start

you start with a totally fucked up first sentence that is where i stopped. get a good editor and do a rewrite and never post with out going through a good editor first.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Read the first sentence out loud

It goes downhill from there. I gave up in the second paragraph.

Anonymous
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