All Comments on 'Online for Orgasm Pt. 01'

Great writing style and a hot story line! Amy

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Great story hope there's more where Elaine founds out D-Rock got her pregnant!

Loved this story, (now a favourite), and already looking forward to part two.

With Karen coming home for a visit, is she going to find out about her mum and ‘D-Rock’. If so, is she going to want a share of what her mum is getting, ending up with a mum/daughter threesome somewhere down the line?

Too good,

Hot as fuck! Seriously hottest story I’ve read here in quite a while! The only thing hotter would be to reveal that Karen had gotten seduced online and set her mom up! I hope she gets involved in the future!

This is top quality writing right here. Can't wait to read the next part hopefully soon fingers crossed

That was fantastic! Incredible build-up to the action, which was every bit as good as I was hoping. And knowing I have 2 more to look forward too... delicious.

I thought this tale was terrific, and I loved the premise. 5 stars from me!

That was an amazing build up to the end.