All Comments on 'Only Red Ch. 02'

by Egmont Grigor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
not bad

it was a pretty good story, not your best, but still good. i really liked this comment, thought it was funny as hell- "What if he drives an open top sports car mom?"

"Insists that he sells it; for God's sake Jasmine, you have to think about your hair."

hahhaa, thats awesome because its true

SinsiousSirenSinsiousSirenover 14 years ago
Wonderful

I enjoyed it. Lovely ending for their future. Motor-cycle shop. I approve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
About as erotic

About as erotic as watching paint dry.

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