All Comments on 'Onyx Dreams Ch. 14'

it's a great story... harsh on cyrus, but great. i know cyrus is becoming a bit difficult to deal with, but please, don't match kennice with Rhys. just reading about him from the other chapters makes him such a turnoff. the "feelings" he claims to have had since he met her don't even seem genuine. i mean, he gets off on her being beaten and whipped. there's a diff btw bsdm and just plain torture. you torture the ones you love. there is enough conflict and growth in the story, perhaps it's time to stop piling more on Cyrus and start resolving

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