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All Comments on 'Oooh, Baby!'

by glynndah

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very nice

Nicely writen. Too bad it was just a knock at the door at the end. Deffinatelly leaves much to the imagination from there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good start

... but I'd like to see what happens after he opens the door

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Arrrrgh... Left me hanging there

well, next installment better be PRONTO!

john-the-authorjohn-the-authoralmost 17 years ago
Oh, yes!

Lovely short fantasy! I very much like the idea of the reality overtaking the fantasy. Got me perked up.

Joe WordsworthJoe Wordsworthover 16 years ago
Hot Stuff

A cliff-hanger? Nice.

MebulbousMebulbousover 16 years ago
Short and sweet ??

A teaser for sure.

Wonder if they get together or if there is a part 2 ?

russaltonrussaltonabout 16 years ago
Such a pleasure

This was a joy to read! Thank you for sharing your vivid imagination!

mnbreastluvermnbreastluverabout 10 years ago
Another nice story

I liked that she turned out, to be the girl next door.

Bert_FeggBert_Feggabout 10 years ago
First of your stories that I've read...

And I loved it - nice one :)

Also it's nice to see that I'm not the only one who struggles with story tags :)

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