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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thoroughly enjoyed it...

...but careful with the Spanish. Although grammatically correct, "que rica" has several meanings, and none of them make sense within the context, at least in Argentina. Wrong gender to the phrase as well. Me, I would have fucked her in the ass. Definitely.

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I enjoy writing "slice of life" situational stories the most. I love the dance that goes on with flirtation, gauging interest, subtly trying to understand each other's motivations as they explore the possibility of a connection, either emotional or physical. The stories that...

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