by MorbidlyBeautiful
Screw what all the detractors say. This was a hot story, although a bit short. What it lacked in length it more than made up with intensity.
Nice work but the story ended kinda bluntly... Write with a bit more patience..
Sooo, how did this guy get in if you're on the 6th floor? How did he know which apartment you were in? If you had just left the bar, he would have had to take a cab to follow you. Whatever...