All Comments on 'Opening the Door: The Stash'

by aldenbradley

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice tale

Good job.

BillPorterBillPorteralmost 13 years ago
Fantasies !!!

I liked your story, it spiked their lovemaking by role playing, with Greg as the man, taking Larry's place. But this is where it should stay, before reality takes over the fantasy, and ruins their marriage

THANK YOU FOR A VERY GOOD STORY

pa47epa47ealmost 13 years ago
Well done..........

Good Job

angiquesophieangiquesophiealmost 13 years ago
interesting last line

now what would she need legal advice for, sometime in the future?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
nicely done

Well written and interesting story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good story

I liked that she told her husband to keep the card...and that she was very satisfied with him. My hubby and I like to role-play and sometimes one or the other will pretend to be someone else or even pretend there is a third person in the room...but just because you add it to the bedroom, doesn't mean that either of us wants it to be real life.

katibkatibalmost 13 years ago
Beautiful

Beautiful writing; excellent editing; a delight to read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Not bad so far, but I see trouble brewing, she could easily cuckold him and become a total slut/bitch. I hope that doesn't happen.

RockyRatRockyRatalmost 13 years ago
Short and Sweet

.....and with a strong touch of realism to boot. Nicely Done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great but...Whoa

She took the bull by the horns, arranged to have dinner at the right place, picked a guy she liked and...floored her husband with her language, her suggestions and brazen ideas.

He played along with the card and the info from the attorney and her idea to go home and play...well =

-women are savvy, clever, cunning and more sly and stealth than men so - I liked the story, the game and the sex and then...

...keep the card, we might need legal advice. She knows how she is going to move him along and probably could give you a timeline. Hope Larry really likes it because It Is going to happen.

Good story, nicely done. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
52

I have read and admired your earlier stories and lamented when you stopped.

I hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very well done

I love the way you made the story believable. Great build up and very erotic. Please continue

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAylealmost 13 years ago
Nice start to a story...

I jerked off endlessly to one particular series of yours ten years ago..."About the Town", and it's wonderful to see you start up again after such a long hiatus. Looking forward to emptying my balls to the rest of this new tale.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 13 years ago
A loving couple

To pick up on an earlier comment, I don't get the solid impression that this game will end with her fucking another guy in any other sense than as a fantasy. It would be nice to see how their roleplaying develops, however; do you plan a follow-up for Larry and Laurie?

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
5*****

She needs to find and seduce a inexperienced but handsome teen guy so that there is no risk of an STD or of her or the teen getting emotionally involved. Then describe the sex to Larry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Who would still be married to a woman

that didn't think sex was a "vital part" of their relationship? What a bitch. The legal advice they need is for the divorce that's coming.

OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
Excellent!!!

Great story!!!!!!

Congrats!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Feebleminded drivel !

1* !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What a goddamn garbage !

1* of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

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