All Comments on 'Opening Up Letting Go Ch. 08'

A sad chapter of a dying man. A harsh reality of life. Well written though

very painful, and very well done! Excellent writing.

Any life has a lot of stories, many are filled with joy, many are mundane, hopefully only a few have as much pain as you have so beautifully written about. I was on pins and needles reading. You certainly grabbed tight to my emotions and twisted them. Seems to me like that is the sign of a great story teller telling a compelling story.

Maybe minimal sex, but good writing

What the heck did I just read?

You're not grumpy Gamby, you're just a sandwich short of a picnic. Josh talked you into putting him in your story? Do you also talk to yourself?