All Comments on 'Operation: Manipulation'

Sentence structure, word choice, tenses, pronoun references, all need clean up. I barely made it through two paragraphs. Have no idea what it was about.

Please don't bother to submit another story and waste our time. Spelling and grammar were absolutely horrible making this story a chore to read. Your fifth grade English teacher would be ashamed to admit she gave you a passing grade.

love it. Please do more.

The trouble with posting short pieces of a story, is that when the author gets around to post the next bit of the story, some readers will forget what the tile of the story was and what the first bit of the story was about, and will never get to read what the story really was all about.

So many stories and so little time to read them, makes the readers selection a bit difficult, and sometimes read only the author's that are known for their good work.

This may be a very good story, but I probably won't see the next part, unless it's a slow day on Literotica.

Sorry about that.

Atrocious !!!!! I already know that you don't know what it means, so look it up.

Great premise. I love how she'll do anything to make him happy, even if it makes her uncomfortable. Please write a sequel in which he gets her to do all sorts of other kinky stuff, then he fucks her brains out.

Come on! Keep writing, I can't wait to read Part 2.

too many grammatical errors. Left after two paragraphs