All Comments on 'Operation: Rigid Pt. 08'

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SlithyTove about 1 month ago

Interesting, but the sex is so over the top that at times it gets a bit tedious as it tries to ramp up even more. A couple more chapters and I expect windows to start exploding in wildly descriptive ways with the percussive nature of the fucking.

KeithW66 about 1 month ago

what a way of taking a job interview

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

Good story, but the sex scenes are too generic. Here one of the shores is described as “Tits” but she doesn’t even give him a tit job.

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