All Comments on 'Opposites Attract Ch. 02'

Questions end in question marks. "Your" and "you're" are not interchangable. Spelling and grammar are just as important as story line. I could go on, but I'm not one to kick a dead dog.

The last commentor is right, you have quite a few gramatical and punctuation errors on the text. The story itself, however, is excellent. Well crafted story, just run your grammer checker on your word processor. I can't wait to see one of the 'wolves in the change.

that was brilliant! please continue

Still enjoying the story - I am looking foreward to the next chapter.

~Bryan

I am very much loveing this story at this point cant say there werent a few mistakes but I still have fallen head over feet for these two! Well onto the next chapter! Thank you for your talent,Good luck and good wrighting!

A friend

On your first chapter, I saw nothing but criticism that wasn't really phrased nicely at all, and although everyone needs a little constructive criticism now and again, I just think u really need to know that your writing is AMAZING, and I'm really loving your story. Really and truly lovely work babe 😍😘