All Comments on 'Opposites Attract Ch. 02'

On your first chapter, I saw nothing but criticism that wasn't really phrased nicely at all, and although everyone needs a little constructive criticism now and again, I just think u really need to know that your writing is AMAZING, and I'm really loving your story. Really and truly lovely work babe 😍😘

I am very much loveing this story at this point cant say there werent a few mistakes but I still have fallen head over feet for these two! Well onto the next chapter! Thank you for your talent,Good luck and good wrighting!

A friend

Still enjoying the story - I am looking foreward to the next chapter.

~Bryan

that was brilliant! please continue

The last commentor is right, you have quite a few gramatical and punctuation errors on the text. The story itself, however, is excellent. Well crafted story, just run your grammer checker on your word processor. I can't wait to see one of the 'wolves in the change.

Questions end in question marks. "Your" and "you're" are not interchangable. Spelling and grammar are just as important as story line. I could go on, but I'm not one to kick a dead dog.