All Comments on 'Orange Moon'

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Well done...just very well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Patrick

got it right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what a sexy story1

The only thing I would say is "more please"! I felt like you could have let them continue for a little bit more, til they all collapse in a pile...but such a sexy story! one of the best I've read in awhile...thank you and keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Extra-special

Loved this story ..... very stimulating !!

gordo12gordo12over 7 years ago
Good read

Not the usual "big cock wife throwing everything away for a glimpse" bullshit.

4*

gordo12gordo12over 7 years ago
Hmmm

to clarify I meant a big cock AND A wife

not a big cock wife..... :-(

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