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Click here"No thinking ... only breasts ... no thoughts ... only breasts ... no resistance ... only breasts ... no mind ... only breasts ..." she droned, but the rest of her monologue was already to silent and was only mouthed in the empty mind of Ioana. But that wasn't important. The only important part was obeying her breasts.
"That took way to long for my liking." Wright groaned and swayed a bit from left to right, while still resting from the huge strain the procedure put on him and his twin.
"Cry me a river, at least we finally managed it. I mean, how long did we plan this whole operation, like 16 years? So, I think, now a small celebration would be appropriate, no?" answered Lefty and let out a mental sigh. He was out of energy too, but the flowing endorphins of a task successfully completed made him quiver with anticipation of things to come.
"Sounds about right, that dumb girl was way too timid to use her powers for the greater good. And by 'Greater Good', I am of course referring to our good." his twin retorted and produced something that could almost be called a devilish smile. "So what now? I never imagined we would actually get this far."
"Well, like a very wise man once said: Today Ioana, tomorrow the world. But for now, I think I want to pay another visit to this brain-dead piece of meat in the next room. I think he would make a magnificent start of our growing collection of ... toys. Furthermore, the things he does with his hands are just magic. We should definitely be on the lookout for more slaves of his caliber, don't you think?" Lefty responded and let out a small laugh.
"That we should definitely do, my brother, that we should definitely do..." Wright murmured and Ioana slowly walked towards the bedroom, where her boytoy was still waiting for her. Things were about to change in a way that she would have never dreamed of. The complete enslavement of her boyfriend should only be the first of many...
- COMMENTS
Satyam40058 months agoYou know what I have a fetish of being like a perfectionist type person , so I always ends up digging and noticing those little details in everything I do and that's why no matter how much I try , I end up reading this till the end always but it's ok , like when I read it initially, I thought there were other 2 people who hypnotised her and that's why everything got messed up in my mind , now , after realising that these are tits who were talking, I'm like ok, it makes sense but still I don't like it's ending much , I don't hate it's ending too and I guess those who commented here didn't like it's ending as well so I just hope you'll make something more for us soon without something like this ending as I just love the way you showed the hypnosis thing and I guess , after reading 100s of stories about mind control, I can say this one is one of the best , if not best , if we consider just it's 2 pages and I guess if you wouldn't have done it's ending like that , I'm sure it would have rated over 4.8 or 9 rather than 4.2 . Still I just want to say make stories what you want to but always consider the reader's opinion as well as they're the one for whom you're making.And I guess I would give that story a try too which you recommended.
gindobre8 months agoAuthor@Satyam4005 glad, that you at least like around 75% of my story. ;-)
I like to put little twists at the end of my stories, this one is inspired by the comic Hypnotica by Metrobay Comix (girl has hypnotic boobs, but is not immune to her own powers and accidentally hypnotizes herself), maybe you'd like to give that one a read as well.
All in all the theme I tried to go with was enormous power, that WILL corrupt the user, no matter how good the intentions. Similar like the classic genie, who is mostly seen as only the provider of the wishes, but almost always has a sinister motive on its own.
...or just read the story until the sex is over, that works as well. :-)
Satyam40059 months agoI re-read the story because it's 1st 2 pages were so damn good, o couldn't resist reading it again , even after I knew this is going to be fuc**d up in the end , but I noticed something this time which I didn't last time. The author did explain about what Loana wants to do with her powers in her relationship, I mean I knew she vowed to not to her powers for her own benefit anymore and that's why I was angry too with the way she behaved with her bf unless I read that and now I totally agree with the thing that if Erik wanted to be hypnotised and have a boobs fetish as well, it is the best for both of them that she should hypnotise him with her tits and make him do whatever she wants to , unless it doesn't end into too much bad for him . The problem was the explanation of relationship, a relationship isn't about exchange of pleasantries , especially a relationship between a bf-gf , that's actually called a business relationship or simply a deal . The relationship we are talking about is way more than that, it's about the love , the connection, the cares for each other and then the pleasantries . I mean if they're serious about making her a good character or something otherwise as the things should be in a porn story , she was absolutely magnificent as the lead character.
Wait also now I got that the people talking there were loana's breasts and I was like wait , what !!! Controlling someone with their breasts is already pretty weird for those who are new in this fantasy but this was just super weird for anyone. Gindobre control your emotions bro 😅😝.
Satyam40059 months agoWhat was that last page about, I still didn't get that. I was 1st about to complain for a little more wholesome story , like it felt like she has no any kind of love for her bf and only wants a sex toy , and then she thinks she isn't corrupted by her power . I mean having Femdom and full control over her bf was okay, I mean that's what this whole mind control thing is about and if she wouldn't enslave him completely the whole mind control thing will be like a half baked story but since it was a relationship she should atleast show some love to her bf too , I mean she almost believed that she fried his mind but she didn't care about him, she cared about what would she have to tell to his family and others . But anyways all of this went wrong in the end . A High quality story with enormous potential got ruined in the end
Anonymousover 1 year agoAre you French, Spanish, or something along those lines by any chance? If you are, solid story, no real complaints.
But if you aren’t, definitely look up how bra sizes work. Was totally confused by what I was supposed to be imagining as 85D literally doesn’t exist in standard bra sizing. I may be wrong but I’m assuming you aren’t speaking in European sizes because 85D isn’t a particularly impressive or noteworthy size no matter what. If you’re writing about breasts, please take the time to learn how to actually describe them.
Just food for thought
