All Comments on 'Orc Dominion: Elfin Descent Ch. 04'

Well written as always. Dorian could be a very interesting character. I would like to read more about him. Will he play a role in the story? I also would like to read a litte more about Jeanette. I guess that she observes Trogar´s plans and pulls some strings in the background..

Heh. I like that Sylvia is back, Dorian interests me too.

Yes, Dorian and Sylvia will both play a fairly important role in the story as secondary characters. Since I went with only two main characters for this story, I wanted to have a richer cast of supporting characters and subplots :)

Hey, nice story. Just a suggestion: How about a spin off story about the elf twins, why they came to Zentara and how they were forced to the brothel. Would be interesting

I hadn't considered that, but there might be some potential there. It could be fun to see the twins trandform from maidens to whores. I will keep it in mind.

Would people rather read that or a Jeanette story?

Depends. What do you have in mind for Jeanette?

Well, Jeanette would either be the conclusion of the Duke's party storyline, where a noble blackmails her after realizing it was her at the party...

Or a story where she is either inducting a new bodyguard or hosting a sex party in the castle and various kinky things happen.

I'm voting for Jeanette and the conclusion of the Duke's party storyline. Are you going to write them after you finished Elfin Descent or in between?

Probably inbetween. I have to go to the hospital this week and will likely not have much writing time for the next month or so. I may try to push out a short story in the meantime.