All Comments on 'Orc Dominion: Zentara Ch. 01'

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AnarchiaAnarchiaabout 10 years ago
nice

sexy. i look forward to seeing more stories! how will the princess handle her desires? will someone she recognises fuck her?

OrcDominionOrcDominionabout 10 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thank you for your comments. New chapters will be released weekly so be sure to keep checking back in! I think you'll enjoy watching as she tries to explore and control her urges.

emmakendrick01emmakendrick01about 10 years ago
Superb!

I wrote on your 2nd piece but I read your first one earlier and it was truly wonderful! Excellent writing and great set up for Jeanette's story arc, definitely interested in seeing more detail on varying clients and their "tastes" like you did in chapter 2. The dialogue is great and you do an excellent job of setting the mood and giving us a perspective of Jeanette's thoughts. I was also wondering if you had a piece of art that you believed best represented Jeanette's appearance. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more excellent erotic literature from you.

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