All Comments on 'Orc Harem Ch. 02'

I need more of this story. Your setup and delivery are impressive. The passion is amped to eleven and I can’t get enough. Great work.

I need more of this story. Your setup and delivery are impressive. The passion is amped to eleven and I can’t get enough. Great work.

I can’t wait for more!!

I'm enjoying this story very much, but did the cellphone catch anyone else by surprise?

Wow, it is getting better and better! Love your story and your writing style.

Green skin, gorgeous body, named Jen? Seen this before.... :)

More plot pls

Cellphone is jarring in a society that values sword and shield?

In all honesty, loving this story so far, you definitely have a way with words. :)

In answer to previous re3view questions though, no the cellphone did not catch me off guard since the first chapter explicitly stated this world is at an equivalent tech level to Earth.

The sword and shield thing I ascribe to, well, being their equivalent of fencing.

I see you have slowed down writing. Please, please don't give up on this story. Please keep writing to its completion. It would be such a shame if you didn't. Cheers!