All Comments on 'Orchid'

I was hoping for the ending that you provided. It reminded me of another series that can be found here based on Zodiac symbols. I don't recall the exact name of the first installment, but one of my favorites in the 6 part series was Leo Shuffle. The girl in the story totally slaughtered the lyrics to The Lido Shuffle which actually happens to be one of my long time favorites. It was freaking hilarious.

Anyway, in that story, she tricks her half brother into believing that when he pokes her with a talisman that she can't see him and he can have his way with her.

I think that the first installment is called Aries Horn. But if that doesn't lead you to it, use Leo Shuffle. I give this one a 4/5.

Cute story.

Cheers

SAGE

Saw that coming, good story. Keep writing it.

Got me hard!!

You switched from one person's view to another without notice. Sounds like rape, even though the sister is secretly up for it.

Who is fooling who?

5*

Tc

Fun times had by both ! Great story.

this is actually pretty good hope for more longer storys

Jumping from one point of view to another with no indication ruined it. Sorry.

This is not urgent way of egotism.. we are waiting for next best story from you

Good work, The endings a little jaring but overall, total banger for so little words

Two words: Freaking Awesome! Never expect the ending and just left speechless with an erection more significant than a just-puberty-turned-hormonal-rampaging morning-woody kid. 5*