Orchid Ch. 03

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AwkwardMD
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His head inside of me.

He grabs my wrist, the one holding my own ass, and redirects it around in front of my own waist, and I need no more direction than that to know he wants me to be touching myself. Both of his hands come down to grab my pale cheeks, fingertips near the sides of my hips with his thumbs stretched near to the center to keep me spread. To keep my bubbly-round ass out of the way.

He stays there, with just his cockhead inside of me, for a few moments, and it dawns on me that this is one of those moments that heeled boots actually are perfect for. Or at least, that's what I was thinking about before he buried himself in a single thrust. His whole cock. All at once. I moan loudly, neck straining as I try to channel as much of that as I can into the belt between my teeth, but there's only so much of myself that I can control when he has his hands on me. And he knows that. And he loves that. And I love that too.

// Author's Note //

It's taken me quite a while to get this whole story out of my head and onto (metaphorical) paper. I'm incredibly appreciative for all the readers who've stuck with it and especially for all the readers who voted for the previous chapters. Please take a minute to vote for this (especially if you liked it (and vote for the previous chapters if you haven't already!!)), and leave a comment if you are so moved to do so. You'll make my day.

This story, more so than others I've worked on, really helped me come to terms with some internal things I've been grappling with. I hope that I've done a good job here rendering layered characters with the right tone. Although I personally am not an MTF transsexual, this story has helped me feel more comfortable with myself as a complex human being. If that resonates with even one other person out there, then I'll sleep really well.

Cheers!

Doc

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OmenainenOmenainenover 3 years ago

Absolutely fucking magnificent. So many things that were exact right. What caught me completely by surprise were Susan’s views on parenthood, maybe because I was really not prepared to take a hit in that particular sore spot in an erotic story. But yay for Eve reappearing. Now I’m just kind of worried how this will end, because now they’re in a good place, and I would really hope for them all to end up in a good place.

AwkwardMDAwkwardMDover 3 years agoAuthor

I know how the end of this one reads, but there is actually one more chapter to Orchid after this. Judging by the way the views drop off after chapter 3, I think a lot of people don't realize it's there, but I'm very proud of it and I hope that going forward more people will see it.

MrRobertsMrRobertsover 3 years ago
Bravo

This whole story was an excellent example of both storytelling and eroticism.

The build up between scenes and the layered character work was amazing.

You have both my respect and loyalty for your upcoming works as I now delve into the back catalog of your work.

Thank you for all you do.

AwkwardMDAwkwardMDover 4 years agoAuthor
Oh By The Way

I have, over the years, collected a lot of art (for this story and others). Be sure to check http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1496319 to see these characters and more!

MattisissyMattisissyover 5 years ago
Wonderful! Imperfect characters doing imperfect things

A truly wonderful story. Interesting real people doing things that are both amazing and dumb. Well written and developed...and so, so, so erotic! One of my all time favorites ever on Literotica!

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