Order of Protection Ch. 44-48

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I got to my bed, completely exhausted and a little bit drunk. Some of the ladies had promised to take me shopping tomorrow, sure that I'd find things to spend my winnings on. I was really enjoying this little side trip.

Retired Alpha David's POV

It had been a rough two days for me since I left Sven and Linnea. I drove back to our Pack, to the questions of both my Pack and the Highlands group. I had met privately with my son and laid out what was going on; he was blown away by what I told him, but he promised to keep the secret. Alpha Esca was disappointed to learn that the Vermillion Pack hadn't been involved in Jessie's death. My son promised him he would keep up the investigation, and Esca's men would stay for another week in case we found the killers.

The flight to Moscow hadn't been fun, my knees were starting to ache with the arthritis and the flight was long. Wolves don't like to be trapped; being stuck in an aluminum tube with smelly humans was not fun. I couldn't drink enough to sleep, and only reading PenumbraMine's "Blue Butterflies" on my iPad helped me get through it. My daughter-in-law had turned me on to her stuff, and I was hooked despite finding it under the 'Chicklit' tab.

I was happy when I arrived and made my way to the taxis. I hadn't checked a bag, just my carryon as I was only staying a day. Winter had arrived in Moscow, it was cold, and a few inches of snow had fallen recently. I was dropped off outside the lobby of their building and walked in unannounced.

"Могу ли я помочь вам, сэр (May I help you, sir?)" The young blonde shewolf at the desk opened her eyes wide as my dominance struck her, not expecting an Alpha.

"Please let Beta David Clarke know that Retired Alpha David Larsen is here to see him."

"Of course, sir." She picked up the phone and made the call. "The Beta will be down in a few moments. May I offer you a drink?"

"No thank you." I started looking at the artwork in the lobby as she returned to her work. I noticed a few of the Moscow Pack warriors were gathering around, just in case. Alphas, even retired ones, didn't just show up at the Pack House without an invitation. The Alpha would be within his rights to expel the person, even kill them.

I wasn't shocked to see not just a surprised Patrick but Alpha Javier and some men emerge from the elevator. I turned and smiled at them as they walked up. "Patrick, Council Member Javier, I apologize for my lack of notice before entering your territory. I need to speak with you urgently,"

Alpha Javier sized me up, he was a legend in the European Council and I bowed to his dominance. "We should go to my office, then. Come." He turned and walked back to the elevator as Patrick came to my side.

I put my arm around Patrick's broad shoulders and pulled him close. "I'm so proud of you, my boy. How is your mate?"

He smiled as we entered the elevator with his Alpha and one guard. "She is doing well. You just missed my mother, she went to visit their Pack a few hours ago. She'll be back in two days."

"I'm afraid I won't be here," I said. "I leave tomorrow for home."

"It was that important to come see us?"

"Critical," I said. "And I need to see you two alone."

Javier raised his eyebrow, but only the three of us entered his office. I laid it all out for them, and their shock at learning Jessie was alive was not faked. Finally, I handed Patrick the jump drive. "Alpha Sven said this was for you, that you would know when to use it."

If they were shocked before, the contents shocked them even more. "We should take him down now," Javier said. "I can call the Council together, we can arrest and try him in under a week."

"No," Patrick said. "There's no reason to act quickly here. Let him twist in the wind for a while." He filled me in on what they had learned about the loans he had taken out, and how his empire was being sold off bit by bit to pay the interest on the loans.

I picked it up then, giving the plan we had worked out with Jessie, John and Sven. "We bleed him dry first. The police are investigating, he owes a lot of money, and we can push off a decision on Yevgheny's estate for months. If the cops or the Mob take him out, it is a much lower risk of us being revealed. In the end, if he dies our vengeance is satisfied." I looked right at Javier. "The moment people see this, they know Jessie is alive and she is in danger again. The two of them need time to train and prepare. If we create a power vacuum in their Pack now, it will just create more chaos. Better to wait until they are ready to take over her Pack."

"This pack isn't hers yet," Javier said.

"Maybe not, but it is her birthright, and once you meet her you will see the two have the power and character to be good Alphas to this Pack," I replied.

"With Jessie having a wolf and her hereditary claim, I would withdraw from consideration for this Pack," Patrick said. "Mischa and I are in no hurry to become Alphas, she wants to go to medical school. We will do it if asked, but I would let Jessie decide first. I'd even take it for a period of time until she is ready to take over, if she asked, but otherwise we will wait."

Javier leaned back. "I didn't expect that from you, Patrick. I thought the lure of the position would be stronger for you."

"Alpha, although I appreciate your confidence in me, my loyalty to Jessie makes it an easy decision. Before she was an Alpha, she was my friend and I was responsible to protect her. She's a good woman, and now I hear she's a good wolf too. I'm happy for her."

He looked at Patrick, nodding his head slowly. "We will let things ride for now, but if I think it's starting to go bad I'll call the Council together and have him arrested," he said. "Killing another Pack's Alpha heir, especially if they involved humans, is enough to have him removed and executed."

"But first," I said, "First we want to destroy his world. And Jessie has a lot of money available now to use on that."

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Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

How far dare they let it run? Yuri will get desperate and lash out!!

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

great one love the humor.

partwolfpartwolfover 5 years agoAuthor
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I changed that line, and looking at the description of the defense plan adjusted the camera descriptions. The use of natural chokepoints remains, but that is a standard strategy, not the active creation of chokepoints that PBL described.

partwolfpartwolfover 5 years agoAuthor
To MyrtleBeachFanatic

First off, thank you for commenting and including specific items you found similar between the two stories. The same issues came up in a discussion I had with PBL today, and I will be looking into them and correcting them as needed.

You are also correct in that I have been friends with PBL for over three years and issues with similar items have shown up in the past and been sources of discussion between us. I have modified things where they were identified, sometimes discussing with her first if I knew it was getting close to something she'd done. I committed to review the work for such issues before publishing. I have been doing that, but it isn't always effective at catching something. Yours was the first comment in the 135k words of this story with specific things I could look at.

If a similarity is found, it was not intentional. The line being the same should not have happened; when I wrote it the phrase came into my mind and I did not recognize its origin until it was pointed out today. I will correct that tonight, although it may take a few days before it updates here.

The defensive strategies are more complicated, because defense tactics for a static position are pretty similar. We discussed them years ago, with me being told I couldn't just use claymores everywhere (dang it) and she wrote her scenes.

I work at a secure industrial sight that uses people, defensive positions and electronics in a similar fashion to what I wrote. I've been in the control rooms and seen what is available and how an active defense against armed adversaries is done. The cameras you mentioned are commercially available; they are also used in the Wolf Tech series on Wattpad to a greater extent than PBL uses surveillance in her story. It's kind of like if two writers describe baking a cake in their story; the basics are the same, so the stories will have similarities even if developed independently. Still, I will review and see if I can differentiate things more from PBL's works.

Her writing is excellent, and I highly recommend South Mountain Pack. I wish her the best, and will continue to respond to any comments that are brought to my attention. Thank you.

MyrtleBeachFanaticMyrtleBeachFanaticover 5 years ago
I see similarities too

I see similarities too. Not the overall story itself but in little things that are being used. This chapter alone the pack changed the landscape to funnel the other pack where they wanted them to go and used cameras in logs and birds nest, just like smp. Also Dante or Carlo said 'May Luna have mercy on them… because we won’t.' Which is what was said here. And before it is said again that it is the werewolf genre, its not. It's many little specific things that are being used.

I would also like to add that I have been friends with pbl for years and due to this I know that she has discussed this with partwolf. He has admitted that he has used certain things and has even had to edit his stories to remove things she brought to his attention and objected to. I would also add that partwolf is part of her inner circle and she has disclosed up coming plot lines and things to him that normal readers aren't a part of as yet. And yes, he has used some of her upcoming ideas and that made her extremely upset. I am aware of this because I brought up several other points to her from his previous stories.

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